Giving the good example for each story, but it will be better if you explain more detail about them. :)
I think that you have a good thesis statement, but would like if you could explain in more detail how the stories connect to the thesis. :)
Giving the good example for each story, but it will be better if you explain more detail about them. :)
ReplyDeleteI think that you have a good thesis statement, but would like if you could explain in more detail how the stories connect to the thesis. :)
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